Five changes I made for the finals
1. Changed some grammar errors
(Review an app related to study skills)
BEFORE
The app is characterized by showing each learner's grades and progress. The app has a total of 80 units within a total of 20 levels, and each unit consists of Lesson1,2,3 and checkpoint. Among them, one level consists of four units. At the end of each level, the scores, overall time required, and completeness of the units are easily summarized. Specifically, you can see the time and performance required for each lesson, and my score evaluated in each field of English. Like this, pressing the Grades&progress button shows the specific progress of my level, unit, lesson. Also, it is very good for setting up your long-term learning plan because it compares and analyzes how much your progress is compared to other learners.
AFTER
The app is characterized by showing each learner's grade and progress. The app has a total of 80 units within a total of 20 levels, and each unit consists of Lesson 1,2,3 and checkpoint. Among them, one level consists of four units. At the end of each level, the scores, the overall time required, and completeness of the units are easily summarized. Specifically, you can see the time and performance required for each lesson, and my score evaluated in each field of English. Like this, pressing the Grades&progress button shows the specific progress of my level, unit, lesson. Also, it is very good for setting up your long-term learning plan because it compares and analyzes how much your progress is compared to other learners.
The professor gave me feedback that there was a grammatical error in this task, so I corrected the grammatical errors.
2. Changed some English proverbs to the correct expression
(Using comics as a teaching tool)
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I translated the Korean proverbs I knew in English, which was a misrepresentation that did not conform to the existing English proverbs. I searched the three English proverbs that the professor gave feedback that they were misrepresentations on Google and corrected them correctly.
3. Corrected the content error
(Introduce a website for assessment)
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I thought that the type of quiz that presents the right and wrong was O/X, but TRUE&FALSE was the right expression, so I fixed it.
4. Changed a grammar error
(Using comics as a teaching tool)
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hurts
I thought there was no grammatical error, but my classmate gave me feedback that I should put 's' after 'it'.
5. Changed a sentence long
(Using comics as a teaching tool)
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I'm sure I took the medicine every day. However, it didn't get better and it hurts more.
I think that's because of working nonstop for two days :(
Reflecting a classmate's feedback that one sentence was too long, the original sentence was recounted in three sentences. As expected, sentences should be short and concise to better understand.